Thread:TJlive800/@comment-4952704-20150504134101/@comment-4952704-20150505090551

I'm glad you took the time to write all that, and i love most of it. I love the whole persona thing, although i think Sif should have this superhero name/pseudonym. I'll go as far as to say in our original plans, he was 75% Liz, just with more to do and has better dialogue.

The ones i really wanna talk about is the last parts of your statement. With all that we have, we shouldn't really put too much emphesis on Sif investigates Bradly, just make it subtle, don't make it the main anything.

Now the big thing here is Conroy and Ziegel, the keys to Hell, Qwan, and the whole revive his dad part.

Conroy and Ziegel? Which Conroy are you referring to? James the father or Robert the son? Either or, it doesn't make sense. Ziegel is from space, he's always in the shadows, he always has his own Wesley to do everything for him. He never went to Earth, nor did he know it existed (the universe is vast, okay, Earth is far from any alien civilizaiton). The only time Earth became relevant was when Sif became the Alphacarnation, and timeline wise (speaking from Hell's Welcoming), that was like 2 months ago.

Either Conroy didn't know aliens existed until months before the Alphacarnation, and even then they couldn't get ahold of them. The Plumbers, while having been there for decades, was only for alien exploration or discovering myths or whatever we have today. It only became active and all that shit when they discovered ACTUAL proof.

Ziegel and Conroy meeting doesn't make any sense. Next up, the keys to Hell and reviving Alphamaster's dad. No. I told you, we're ditching the whole reviving his dad. We can keep the whole he goes to hell, but it would be redone like, for example: He made a deal with a black marketer, and he has a package (a weapon; we can build it up like What Is Alphamaster's Weapon?) in a cell.

When everyone follows, they meet the warden, Qwan. At the end of the episode, when he "dies", we can reveal that he was apart of the cult the whole time. Alphamaster's whole motivation was that the Alphatrix fucked up his life. His dad abandoned his son for the Alphatrix, we could say an Alphacarnation fucked up his face, so he had to get Pyronite parts, etc. He wants the Alphatrix gone, and Ziegel asks him to join the cult, in which he agrees. He's like the Wesley of this cult, he does all the work.

Instead of the drones we planned, its other aliens, the other members of the cult. I pretty much really like everything else. But i would like a straight answer about the whole personal life and showing his origins thing. The whole thing that happened, Chelsea, Tronn, The Plumbers, this Cult, Alphamaster, and everything else i mentioned taking a toll on him. I'd like more of a reply and more on that, expand on that. Expand more on his personal life, because i don't want too much badassery as of now. I at least want him to be the most human character of this.

For Season 1, he can't be cool and calm, not too much of a badass, just human. A human who is getting introduced to aliens, magic, and the consequences of this Alphacarnation life. Before we can make him go full badass, we gotta show his human side. He has to be a little too overwhelmed when introduced to aliens and fucking magic.

This basically destroys all religion, although he's not a religious person himself. This turns everything on its head, he can't be "FUCK YEAH I'M GONNA BE A HERO" right off the bat. When he actually goes out and fight, lets say Episode 2, at first he's having fun, then he gets his ass beat. Then he goes to look on the news, and he sees this shit. Everyone's investigating him, his parents are worried sick, everyone is confused, back in school, everyone is mixed, and it takes a toll on him. That is consequence.

He has to look back and see if this is a good idea, he should doubt himself way too many times. You didn't reply to this part at all, which kinda made me upset. And you didn't reply to Masquerade at all. Bradly doesn't care for Sif, he's mostly after Masquerade. Even when they become buddies.

Please reply to this in depth and add your own stuff to it.

EDIT: I think we should probably edit the episode guide, both the outline and the titles. And please, refrain from future seasons as much as possible. We're not gonna get anything done if we focus too much on the other seasons.