Thread:TJlive800/@comment-4952704-20150224023342/@comment-4952704-20150324151335

I made Bradly's page. Free reigns to you.

I've just been thinking even harder recently. In the fucking absense in which i fucking wait and wait until you fucking answer, because you seemingly try to ignore me when i realize my faults and try to evolve as a motherfucking writer. Anyway, i've gone back and revisited some of my old shit, such as Sif 100: The Rebooted Series.

I remembered an old fault i had. I introduced a character named Dr. Ludvig Tron (first incarnation of Tronn), who was meant to be a father figure and mentor to Sif, as well as co-creator of the Alphatrix. You can ask me questions later, but he had a few flaws. I won't get into all of them, just this main one: HE DIDN'T FUCKING DO SHIT, BUT JUST SIT THERE, POINTING OUT THE OBVIOUS, AND BEING "Mortal Support" TO SIF.

HE DIDN'T TRAIN, LIKE HE SAID HE WAS GOING TO. So i look to Alpha, and this training beginning, and like... how do i word this: ITS FUCKING USELESS. I don't really want Tronn to be that shitty mentor figure like he was in TRS, and he actually needs to train Sif. Like, in his alien form. We can generate some of the setup and payoff through these training scenes.

Tronn training Sif as say... Armodrillo? He trains Sif, gives him a move Sif can't do, and you can see where i'm going with this. Cliche'd? Well, i tried. But that was just an example. We actually need Tronn to train Sif and be GOOD moral support. The closest thing Sif has to a father, after his real one bailed. Maybe Tronn can give Sif advice on his adoptive parents, etc. Make the audience cry even.

But that's all i got so far. Actually comment please.