Thread:TJlive800/@comment-4952704-20150604202841/@comment-16747922-20150606230738

ZeVikingSif wrote: Could you be a penis and give me writing tips or detail tips? Give me some example? Maybe point out the flaws i already have? Watch Arrow, get to season 2, admire the way the plots in that season intertwine so well and then you'll inspire yourself. Arrow is shit for the first six episodes then gets better slowly but surely. Season 2 is on par with Flash. Season 3 is uneven and the finale was garbage.

On a serious note, the writing contest seems AMAZING! The concept of introducing a villain. But dude, you say you're inspiring the villain on yourself... y-you murdered your mother?