Thread:TJlive800/@comment-4952704-20150504134101/@comment-4952704-20150507235549

Yo, whenever you're free, can you redo the Destiny outline? Essentially, here's how it is:

Alphamaster's Wesley and the Weasel are making deals, and Sif goes and interferes. Think of it as Daredevil's pilot. Although the deal goes south. And in between this, there is a flashback to the origins. They're just flashbacks to the important bits. Sif's relationship with his adopted parents, his best friend Preston, his social life, and he usually uses the internet a lot.

Base him off yourself if you must, but he is mostly an outcast. On the internet, he is harassed a lot, i guess you can add in a hobby like making fanart or actually writing fan fiction, but he is mostly harassed. His parents always fight, and his crush doesn't like him, and he gets picked on at school. And during this shit, he starts cutting himself (Yeah), and eventually decides to commit suicide, but is saved by Tronn. He tries to forget this, and deny this ever happening.

Present day (aka 3 months later), he is a hero that no one knows about and is always feared. Everyone he knows has a strong opinion on aliens, and Tronn trains him how to use his aliens properly. But he is mostly after Alphamaster, who is stationed on Earth for the time being, and his Wesley, who is making deals with Weasel and trying to get the keys to hell.

You can edit this to make it better, add in more detail, maybe remove some bits, but this is generally how it goes. I'm basing parts of this on Daredevil's and Breaking Bad's pilot. But the attempted suicide and shit will come back. Oh, and though this doesn't have to be Destiny, he goes on the internet and sees the opinions on aliens, and actually praises them. Yeah.

Make Sif as human as possible, no goddamn narrations, no badassery YET, he's a normal kid with human emotions, who now has powers. There should be consequence to everything, every property damage will be blamed on aliens, anything and everything you can think of will be against aliens.

EDITish: We can probably stretch some of the flashbacks to later episodes. I'm trying to make Sif as human as possible, because everything else on BTFF has never ever done this, or at least right. I don't wanna make Sif fall into the category of generic robot who always makes the right decisions and has no consequence, and is always the bragging hero type deal. Lets try to add the consequence, emotion, and all that human stuff. He will make mistakes, and that's okay. So yeah, add/edit/remove as you wish.

So please, whatever you do, refrain from all that badass shit and save it for Bradly, because Sif is a fucking HUMAN KID. I can't stress this enough.